Now what?

Note: This poem was meant to be read at a quick pace with one line with two lines at a time connected to each other only in an almost lyrical manner. Took advantage of poetic license here with capitalizations, abbreviations etc, flows better I believe. Not the final draft (nothing on the blog is..) and comments/constructive criticism welcome


waves crashing
but i'm not drowning
try to swim
but pressure's rising
try to breathe
but air is ebbing
where am i
if not drowning
had never noticed
i'd been falling
where will we be
there's no foreseeing
will i breathe
he's not guaranteeing
will i survive
chances slimming
will i die
now he's declining.
i feel a pull
i think i'm spiraling
reach out my hand
that he's not grabbing
i hear a noise,
is that him laughing
i have a thought-
this was his planning!
i really wish
i'd seen this coming
was he really there
were we just pretending
now i resolve
this shall be ending
the tide shifts
now i am winning
you cannot win
for i'm more cunning
and cant escape
dont bother running
you chose your path
now keep on walking
u picked the wrong one
to start betraying
i hope you're ready
for what's coming
cuz now its only
the beginning